Peer Review by Jasmine khawar (India)

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Untitled concrete poem

By: black_and_red_ink


FREE WRITING

                           Water Droplet          


                                        i
                                    want
                                  to Lick.
                               Every. Drop.
                             of the words
                            from your lips.
                            and drink your
                            voice. but you
                              left and i am
                                  parched.
                          

I hope the formatting doesn't mess up. Anyway, concrete poems are harder than they look lol. This was supposed to be shaped like a raindrop, teardrop or water droplet. 

Peer Review

Overall it's format is amazing, like shape of a water droplet and the words you chose are also amazing.


It's perfect and fun to read and I love all the lines!! <3


Reviewer Comments

This piece is adorable.
So beautiful...:)