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Untitled concrete poem

May 30, 2020

FREE WRITING

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                           Water Droplet          


                                        i
                                    want
                                  to Lick.
                               Every. Drop.
                             of the words
                            from your lips.
                            and drink your
                            voice. but you
                              left and i am
                                  parched.
                          
I hope the formatting doesn't mess up. Anyway, concrete poems are harder than they look lol. This was supposed to be shaped like a raindrop, teardrop or water droplet. 

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7 Comments
  • Jasmine khawar

    This is incredible!! Wow
    Your format is amazing


    5 months ago
  • ElsaRee

    WOW! Awesome! It is beautiful!


    5 months ago
  • Deleted User

    This piece is amazing! The last time I did one of these was two years ago, and it was awful.


    5 months ago
  • Tomb of Jade (#spookified)

    This is amazing!!


    5 months ago
  • A Rose

    Dang. Well written, well formed.


    5 months ago
  • sunny.v

    wow! this is great! your formatting is so wonderful and clever without sacrificing your pretty words!


    5 months ago
  • And_The_Stars_Laughed

    Wow, this is beautiful; I love the formatting!! :)


    5 months ago