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Sawyer

Wild

May 14, 2015

PROMPT: WILD

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Wild is the grass that flows in the winds of the praires 

The birds that glide

through the skys of the forest

 The majestic stallions that roam the plains.

The fish that slice through the waves of the great oceans.

Thats..... Wild!

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  • Aspen Gray

    I love the imagery!! Especially your phrases like "slice through the waves" and "grass that flows". My only suggestions are a few small spelling/grammar errors. "prairies", line one. "skies", line 3. "That's", line 6. And about that last line, it may come off a bit corny to some people. If you want a stronger, more serious ending, avoid using exclamation points. Maybe your last line could even be about you, or humans, or something... Anyway, great poem.


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