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The mostly true story of what I've been attempting this summer!
I was shocked at how someone could write a story about learning to play a difficult piano piece so interesting and intriguing. Your style shined throughout this whole piece, and your humor within this work is destined to get even the most heartless of people laughing (if you couldn’t tell by my highlighted comments)
I can’t really think of much to I would have liked to see differently, but one thing I would have enjoyed seeing was your moms reaction to you finally being able to play the song at the end of the passage.
I loved this so much! I can’t wait to see what you writings hold for the future.