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Message to Readers

This definitely doesn't mean I want to be famous! I just love celestial imagery! :D <3

Title suggestions, PLEASE!

girl among the stars #IAmContest

June 7, 2020

FREE WRITING

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I am stitched from stardust, I am sewn from dreams
I wonder if everything is exactly as it seems
I hear efflorescent whispers and the sun's sniffling cries
I see people praising what will ultimately be their demise
I want to dance among the constellations, toes on moonbeams
I am stitched from stardust, I am sewn from dreams

I pretend to kiss the comets, I pretend to caress the meteors
I feel a stabbing pain for those who were deemed inferior
I touch that boundless azure dome, my fingertips against sky
I worry about those I love, that they someday might die
I cry as I dip my fingers into my ancestor's bloodstreams
I am stitched from stardust, I am sewn from dreams

I understand that life isn't fair, but it's beautiful too
I say that everyone deserves an equal shot and we all have goals to pursue
I dream of book covers inked with my name, touching lives of others
I try to forgive, but not forget, so my soul can finally recover
I hope that one day I might be free of these stifling regimes
I am stitched from stardust, I am sewn from dreams
People are actually made of stardust! Also, I'd love some title suggestions if anyone has any!

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19 Comments
  • Deleted User

    Dang girl, your writing always amazes me! :)


    6 months ago
  • sunny.v

    replying: aww thank you! also writer’s block...oh woe. hmm, perhaps listen to a song and see what you can get from there? maybe think about summer? perhaps go through the spam of your life and make it dramatic as possible? i usually go the song route, though. i know you’ll beat this writer’s block! i’m always open to give u prompts if u need them haha.


    6 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    Soooo beautiful


    6 months ago
  • joella

    wow. this is amazing. i love celestial imagery too!


    6 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    Yes everything around us, including us is actually stardust!<3


    6 months ago
  • Fabiana250

    This was gorgeous!! I really like it, thanks for entering :)


    6 months ago
  • Halopoet

    This is a beautiful piece. I totally lovvvvveeeeee it. It feels like you're writing a dreamer's thoughts. Name it "the stardust dreamer" very stupid i know but, it describes the girl. Heheheh


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Replying: Aw, your entire comment just made me so happy.


    6 months ago
  • poetri

    Replying: Is it weird? Probably. But I also have no friends so...idk. Pride month is coming up, women's rights are ALWAYS important, and racism is sadly very prevalent rn. I'd read any of those. Good luck! I'm excited to see what you come up with. Is it weird to help that even though I still want to win? Ahaha I have no idea...besides, I'd rather be a helpful person than keep ideas and suggestions to myself.
    Besides I'm gonna do a fictional story that has nothing to do with the bay or teenage angst lol :)


    6 months ago
  • Wicked!

    This is gorgeous! I love the celestial imagery here! The title could be 'stitched from stardust//sewn from dreams'.


    6 months ago
  • sunny.v

    i liked “stitched from stardust”! also hehe *breakdancing ensues*


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Oh, maybe you could call it Galaxies Sewn, Star-crossed Whimsy, or Collecting Stardust. I love New York_dreamer's idea though.


    6 months ago
  • sunny.v

    oooooh I love love love love how STARRY this is!! it’s so pretty and whimsical mia!! *hangs this piece up on my bedroom ceiling*


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Replying: Ooh, I love the word aerial. *files it away in the memory banks* And yeah, I thought mine would take like 15 mins, but even 30 was a conservative estimate. I looked at my activity and it was probably even longer.


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    How long did it take you to write this? Mine took like 30 minutes!


    6 months ago
  • Doodleninja

    the imagery of "stitched from stardust" is just SUPERB. (you could maybe title it that phrase) I love the verbs in this. XD


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    You could call it nebula or supernova maybe, but I like the current title


    6 months ago
  • New York_dreamer

    "stardust dreaming" is my idea. also this is quite lovely :)


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Hands down the best I am poem I've ever read


    6 months ago