Common girl with uncommon dreams.
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Hopeless Romantic

Message to Readers

I hope you like it, Dylan... BTW it is June and it is somewhat rainy and romantic, right? I feel the vibes.. ;P

That Night,In Rain...

June 13, 2020


let the sun rise
together we'll make the world a paradise

your caramel eyes 
make me feel like I'm dancing in the skies

let the darkness fade away
let the sun rise 
let it rain
let it wash away our pain

your sight is mesmerizing
my heart is paralyzing 

my breath is yours
you are my paradise

you're my light,
hold me tight
together we'll touch those heights.

you know we won't be together 

let's spend the remaining hours
you be my shadow

you be my rainbow
fill my life with your colors bright

let it rain
let the saline droplets roll by your caramel eyes 
you're my light
let's spend this night
in the rain.
the world will not let us unite 
we will fight

but if I loss you
Then, I will remember 
this rain
this night...

word count 151
date completed 1-6-2020
This is my first try of a two-voices poem/ song. This is for Two Heartbeats Contest. Please check out this unique contest.


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  • Jasmine khawar

    Beautiful!! Is this a song too? So peaceful, romantic. Wow!!

    17 days ago
  • Two Heartbeats

    This is really beautiful. It gives me Jose Gonzalez-esque vibes and I love it.

    6 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    I loved it so much! How cute......rain is indeed romantic

    6 months ago
  • Eleanor M

    as a fellow hopeless romantic, i feel this. you really KNOW how to capture a reader. it's awesome, and an ability i wish i had learned a long time ago.

    6 months ago
  • Ahsan Nizaam

    Absolutely beautiful! A worthy duet I'd say.

    6 months ago
  • PureHeart

    This is beautifully written, and I love your unique approach on writing a poem. You're definitely a source of inspiration!

    6 months ago
  • thelostave

    Woah. This is so good! <3ed it!

    6 months ago
  • ElsaRee

    Nice work, but please stop publishing it over and over again(no offence, though :D )

    6 months ago