Samina

India

Common girl with uncommon dreams.
Perspiration always turns to perfection :-)
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I hope you like it, Dylan... BTW it is June and it is somewhat rainy and romantic, right? I feel the vibes.. ;P

That Night,In Rain...

June 13, 2020

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(her)
let the sun rise
together we'll make the world a paradise

(him)
your caramel eyes 
make me feel like I'm dancing in the skies

(both)
let the darkness fade away
let the sun rise 
let it rain
let it wash away our pain

(her)
your sight is mesmerizing
my heart is paralyzing 

(him) 
my breath is yours
you are my paradise

(both)
you're my light,
hold me tight
together we'll touch those heights.

(her)
you know we won't be together 
forever

(him)
let's spend the remaining hours
you be my shadow

(her) 
you be my rainbow
fill my life with your colors bright

(him)
let it rain
let the saline droplets roll by your caramel eyes 
 
(both)
you're my light
let's spend this night
in the rain.
the world will not let us unite 
we will fight

but if I loss you
Then, I will remember 
this rain
this night...

 
word count 151
date completed 1-6-2020
This is my first try of a two-voices poem/ song. This is for Two Heartbeats Contest. Please check out this unique contest.

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7 Comments
  • Two Heartbeats

    This is really beautiful. It gives me Jose Gonzalez-esque vibes and I love it.


    about 1 month ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    I loved it so much! How cute......rain is indeed romantic


    about 1 month ago
  • Eleanor M

    as a fellow hopeless romantic, i feel this. you really just...you KNOW how to capture a reader. it's awesome, and an ability i wish i had learned a long time ago.


    about 1 month ago
  • Ahsan Nizaam

    Absolutely beautiful! A worthy duet I'd say.


    about 1 month ago
  • PureHeart

    This is beautifully written, and I love your unique approach on writing a poem. You're definitely a source of inspiration!


    about 1 month ago
  • thelostone

    Woah. This is so good! <3ed it!


    about 1 month ago
  • ElsaRee

    Nice work, but please stop publishing it over and over again(no offence, though :D )


    about 1 month ago