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I would really,really appreciate feedaback..So please let me know..Love you all <3
I love that this app provides comfort instead of convenience or fun, which is what most apps are created for.
Yes, I definitely would use it and I'm sure most of the population would too. This app could solve loneliness, but in the long run, it could also boost self-confidence because it acts like a true friend.
One minor suggestion is to change the wording of the highlighted part. "Broken" could be swapped to a stronger word for pain. Instead of saying "and is hiding it..." maybe you could change it to "but you're masking the pain with the facade of a weak smile?" Overall, fantastic job! I love the ending where you concluded that no advanced technology or fancy appliance can beat nature or the human heart.