ElsaRee

India

PERCABETH FAN..
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Aspires to be a writer
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A silly wish..

June 1, 2020

I just wish,
A warm hug when feeling so hollow?
Trust me, it is heartbreaking when such a little thing seems so impossible.
A pat on head, perhaps?
If you think it is such a pathetic wish, then you're lucky and I'm jealous.
A shoulder to lean on?
How does it feel like?
Arms to hold you tight?
Note: Not your own (like always).
Above all, something to let others know that you're broken inside and is hiding it with a weak smile?

No, no.
They shouldn't invent such things. Some things are divine only in their raw nature. Some things aren't supposed to be artificial. Some things are beautiful only when they arouse from a beating heart, not a robot.

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11 Comments
  • birthdaycandles

    "Some things are beautiful only when the arouse from a beating heart, not a robot."
    So so so powerful and yet painfully true. This poem is beautiful :)


    4 months ago
  • Ghoulgirl2020 (#Queenie's Halloween | I have been called Cool before if you know what I mean) ;)

    Aw...these aren't silly wishes. I wish for these things all the time! My family isn't a very "touchy-feely" family, so I find myself yearning for hugs sometimes...


    5 months ago
  • kittycat

    so pretty! <3


    5 months ago
  • Charisse Marison

    This is fantastic. You're so talented <3


    5 months ago
  • Jasmine khawar

    It's just incredible <3


    5 months ago
  • bambiamby

    this is so beautiful and i love the message that comes along with it too!!


    5 months ago
  • Sol noctis

    This is amazing!


    5 months ago
  • Huba Huba

    Absolutely love this. The message is powerful.


    5 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Wow... I am quite moved by this and I'm not sure what to say


    5 months ago
  • acrosstheuniverse28

    I love your message, that certain things cannot be manufactured or artificial. "Some things are divine only in their raw nature." -- so true!


    5 months ago
  • Emi

    I love the overall message at the end, although this poem is so heartbreakingly beautiful.


    5 months ago