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It was super poignant. I could relate to this easily without having been through the same experience as you. The emotions you expressed here were subtle yet when you noticed them, it's like BAM HERE IS A BUNCH OF FEELINGS but like in a good way.
I think if we got some more information about why the photoshoot was taking place maybe? but idk honestly this is super good. I would love to see more about where the photo hangs, how it looks among everything else you see near your desk, etc.
Well written and pleasing to read. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but overall well written. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!