Common girl with uncommon dreams.
Perspiration always turns to perfection :-)
Hopeless Romantic

Message to Readers

is this a song?
I wrote the first part 5 years ago. But after I heard BILLIE EILISH's song OCEAN EYES (I heard the song 3 years back maybe). I was lost in the song...

Your deep blue eyes seems like an ocean. maybe a song..

May 30, 2020


Your deep blue eyes seem like an ocean
Your curvy lashes in motion
Are just like tides
touch and wash away my heart
I love 'em

I don't think I'll be able to confess
I am a total mess
My eyes are now in a marathon,
I can't stop
I should move on
Your deep blue eyes seem like an ocean
I am lost in 'em
I am lost.

Your deep blue eyes seem like an ocean
I wanna erase them
but they have taken a place
I can't fill that space
I am lost in 'em
I am lost

Your deep blue eyes seem like an ocean
my love is like an ocean 
I am lost in it
I am lost 

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date published 28-5-2020


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  • PureHeart

    So beautiful. The first paragraph is truly captivating

    11 months ago
  • bride124

    Amazing, as always!

    11 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    I think I like your poem even more than the original song!! This is so beautiful

    11 months ago
  • Mishthi Sharma


    11 months ago
  • Sol noctis

    You've written amazing stuff!!
    And yes, I gotta hear that song out now;)

    11 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    I think I should listen to the song now!

    11 months ago