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This is a very interesting piece, and the switching between the him and her outlines multiple perspectives while pointing out similar ideas, how devastating this would be.
I think it would've been better to put in more emphasis on how it feels as if the world ended for them. "I don't know what to do" could have the second line be something like "it feels as if life cannot go on." This is a good piece!