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this is for a contest so i’ll probably take it down soon after some feedback/criticism. PEER REVIEWS NEEDED PLEASE! <3
I really wasn't expecting the 'chronological' format you wrote this in! The titans too, I really don't read much about them since people tend to focus more on the gods. Actually, this whole piece was a pleasant surprise! Your descriptions of each event and how the people acted each time really brought this whole piece to life!
I feel like sometimes, I didn't completely understand what was going on in certain lines? It might just be my limited knowledge of Greek Mythology but it was a little confusing. I think that sometimes, there was so much jammed into one line that it was hard to process.
Sorry if I sound really nitpicky in this review. It's a bad habit of mine *scratches head*. If you have any questions about anything I mentioned then feel free to message me about it!
Take all I said with a grain of salt because ultimately, it's you that knows what's best for your writing.
Good luck on the contest :). This is really beautiful and will definitely be a contender.
Amazing as always!