joella

Israel

she/her | high school | wasian | enfp

i sip inked tea in someone else's garden

(formerly ★ white mountains ★)

Message to Readers

to the person who always promised they knew more than me about life.

I have no idea what's going on here. at least I had fun writing it.

you singlehandedly cultivated my recalcitrance

May 27, 2020

FREE WRITING

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you'll cajole 'till I capitulate and I just want to meditate
or anything to get away / to circumvent, you denigrate
the people who get in your way
well I'm proud to be disparate / disrepute, I celebrate
you've an eclectic selection of what deserves affection
to your intellect: no disrespect / I don't want your 
protection
you'll expurgate the fallacies / slave to twisted morality
I'm just a technicality, blip on your vision
through me I know you live regretted decisions
that defines vicarious / but life is multifarious
isn't that hilarious? no need to be contrarious
"you're a neophyte, you're young, puerile"
was naive once, can't be beguiled
no longer / independent mind...









 

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5 Comments
  • sunny.v

    your vocabulary is just *mind blown*. lol i was like...what does THAT mean, in the most pleasant way. i feel like this piece is out of my league but i’ll continue to admire it. as one usually does irl. “ you've an eclectic selection of what deserves affection ” HECK YEAH THAT SOUNDS AWESOME


    6 months ago
  • Emi

    I love the vocabulary here; it's so fun and complicated. I'm a huge fan of big words, so keep going!


    6 months ago
  • ElsaRee

    Wow!! great job! <3


    6 months ago
  • bambiamby

    amazing


    6 months ago
  • chrysanthemums&ink

    i... have no words??? this is different from anything i've ever read of yours and i love it??? how. what? the rhyme scheme was so well done and it's almost like a rap? (?) someone call Naomi Scott because i'm Speechless.
    *me googling most the words in this because my vernacular is too small to comprehend this masterpiece. the vocabulary just amplifies the narrator's voice in the best way and gosh this is something i've never seen before and it's actually brilliant wow.


    6 months ago