MimiChoudhury

India

Hey
I've been named Swastika but please call me Mimi
I don't know why people tend to set such biggg names to small kids!!
|Fangirl|
Slytherdor
Mortal Instruments
Die-hard Twilight hater(sorry there Twi-hards. But I respect your opinion as well)

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Writing Streak Week 9 Day 2

May 26, 2020

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She hurried down the pathway , her blonde hair flying carelessly around her fair countenance; the violet shoes worn out from all the walking, but still she walked- but the only scene disclosed before her eyes , under the sun and beneath the huge mango trees, surrounded by an array of expensive bouquets, was his grave.

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    Such a twist at the end! The descriptions are so light and romantic until the very end where you point out the grave, which makes the atmosphere dark and brooding, giving the reader a shock of a shiver down their spine. Great job!


    6 months ago