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lady serpentine #rollthedice2

May 28, 2020

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her glittering fangs pierce my torso, 
    scaly body rolling with the crackle of each vertebrae,
        a last dance that nobody asked for. 
    nightshade vows play upon reptilian lips
as she toys with me, her victim,
    a viper assassin collecting her smuggled paycheck.
        lady serpentine strikes, crimson blood
    mixing with her deadly venom. 
as my eyes flutter closed, numbness spreading 
    through my fingers,
i hear her ophidian whisper.
                                                                                  untillll tomorrrrrrow . . .
her hiss fills the void of silence before 
    everything goes black.
        and i wake once more, with her fangs at my throat.
Glittering, serpent (which I changed slightly to serpentine), nightshade

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8 Comments
  • sunny.v

    this piece made me need a good ol’ snake lady to bite me. *you stare at me, because your piece absolutely described her as murderous and def not as a nice lady* .....what? i’m a sucker for femme fatale ;) gorgeous piece, mia!!


    6 months ago
  • elliem

    Oh my gosh, Mia! The storytelling in this piece is incredible. Thanks again so much for entering! A pleasure to read. :)


    6 months ago
  • ElsaRee

    WOW!!! This is amazing!


    6 months ago
  • joella

    ooh I love this!!


    6 months ago
  • acrosstheuniverse28

    Amazing descriptions! Gave me chills!


    6 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    you have describe her so well. Snakes are quite fascinating!<3


    6 months ago
  • Just_Those_Christmas_Memories (#Holidayvibes)

    Beautiful!


    6 months ago
  • amazing grace

    reply: i now i can not wait for season five.


    6 months ago