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mortal divinity #rollthedice1

June 7, 2020

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royal, dripping ichor splatters the floor and sky, 
blossoming into waves of watery hemoglobin infused with
stolen immortality. 
she dances in it, as it rains down around her, 
golden happiness seeping into her skin. 
honeysuckle blossom tucked behind her ear,
she basks in the warmth in her chest,
shielding her face from the heat radiating within.
and she lays down among the stars,
between the queenly constellations.
i'm one of you, she whispers
and cassiopeia scoffs while 
examining her reflection in the glassy reflection
in andromeda's eyes.
as supernovas shattered the heavens,
she stirs her ambrosia over ice, musing about
her new circumstances.
for, she was a mortal divinity, but a deity no less.

and she eclipsed.

 
Honeysuckle, constellation, and wave

the title popped into my head and sounded familiar, so I looked it up to make sure I wasn't plagiarizing and it is the name of a metal band, in case people are wondering.

lowercase intentional! :)

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12 Comments
  • chrysanthemums&ink

    oh god this is absolutely gorgeous. i don't think i can say it anymore than the comments below. good luck in the competition ;)


    6 months ago
  • sunny.v

    baaaah why haven’t i seen this?? it’s just...simply...divine...(see what i did there!...i’m not funny). “she stirs ambrosia over ice” SIMPLY AMAZING. i want to print this out and like, drink it or something. it’s just so regal and beautiful. (ps hehe thank u for coming back to see the other comments)


    6 months ago
  • elliem

    Oh gosh Mia, this is so gorgeous! I always love seeing your space themes in your writing. You're so talented!


    6 months ago
  • Wicked!

    Replying: That's not what I meant lol! There's no need to change it or mention my piece. I'm sure you didn't plagiarize it off my piece :)


    6 months ago
  • Wicked!

    This is such a gorgeous piece! Also, I wrote a piece called 'She is a Mortal Divinity' a while ago and I had /no clue/ that it was actually a band's name!


    6 months ago
  • TerenNeret

    Breathtaking imagery and stunning storytelling. I absolutely love the gorgeous aesthetic that the poem oozes. Can't wait to see more!


    6 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    and she lays down among the stars,
    between the queenly constellations.
    i'm one of you, she whispers

    JUST GORGEOUS!


    6 months ago
  • fatpanda

    replying: yeah it's alright. thank you for all your entries!


    6 months ago
  • Emi

    The language here is gorgeous and very poetic.


    6 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    let me breathe first (*inhale*) before saying anything (*exhale*) The diction, the imagination in this piece is flawless, literally gave me chills!<3<3


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Oh my freaking gosh this is awesome


    6 months ago
  • outoftheblue

    This is gorgeous, i love the imagery in "blossoming into waves of watery hemoglobin infused with
    stolen immortality "


    6 months ago