BizzleWrites

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I'm Issy.
I'm 13 and an aspiring artist and author.
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My entry for enchanted forest poem #LBC12

May 23, 2020

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This forest is enchanted
I know it to be true
The trees sway 
In a beautiful way
Like dancers
Under the deep sky of blue
A kangaroo hops away
Like a spirit
Through the trees
A wombat borrow 
A secret spot
People are rare to be seen
The enchanted animals are not
A flash of blue
A sharp hard beak
A kookaburra sings from her tree
This forest is enchanted
The animals I see
A white feather
A cockatoo
It's yellow plume so bright
This forest is enchanted
I knew it from first sight 

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7 Comments

  • BizzleWrites

    also I don't know how to tag someone on WtW, so if someone could tell me how that would be really helpful


    7 days ago

  • BizzleWrites

    Charisse Marison I would love it if you reviewed 'a black and white cat'


    7 days ago

  • Charisse Marison

    Also, is there a certain piece you want me to review? All your pieces are lovely <3


    7 days ago

  • Charisse Marison

    Sounds so enchanting and beautiful! Wonderful job <3


    7 days ago

  • lianhabanana!

    Thanks for entering my competition! Wonderful piece! Thanks so much :)


    8 days ago

  • Chloe :) <3

    Also Thank you !!!!!!!!! For being my 50th Follower :))))


    8 days ago

  • Chloe :) <3

    This piece is really nice! I looked it the repetition, the subtle rhymes it flows amazingly!!


    8 days ago