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I absolutely LOVE the imagery in this, it's so breathtaking. The metaphors, the moon, stars the wind howling in the trees. It's short but beautiful.
The part where you mention the falling stars. It feels a tad incomplete. I feel like there's a ton of ways you can expand on that idea, especially as you have done it, while describing the moon and trees. Maybe a metaphor?