happy butterfly

South Africa

a shy people's person
wtw's official little sister:)
turn it into art

i've spilt all my stars out for you

forever is the sweetest con
-taylor swift

Message from Writer

the world is spinning me in all it's divine moments and have i ever the chance of being blessed like this again?

special wtw sister to anne blackwood<3
honey aunt to FantasyOtter12:)
spectral and i are admirers who love keyboard smash

take me to the lakes, where all the poets went to die - taylor swift

it's time to sing something for no other reason than to feel my voice -anne blackwood

so rearrange the world and perhaps you'll find your celebration of humanity -dmoral

Swan in my stomach

May 23, 2020


You slipped your hand in mine,
I felt something in my stomach
No-not butterflies
they're too subtle a feeling.
It was something like a
Yes,a swan flapping inside my stomach,
Making me giggle.
Your eyes not the blue of the ocean,
Instead a freeing blue of the sky.
Your smile made my heart flutter out my chest to wrap its wings around yours,
As you wrapped your love around me with the words
" I love you."
I felt the fog tickle my ears,
As we walked up hills in the sunrise,
But that was it,
It wasn't fog,
I was flying,
My head in the clouds.
I should've known this couldn't have been real

Was that an unexpected ending? lol.I go through phases when I finish a piece. the stages are: yay!.I hate this,I love this ,meh,then unexpected.
Im currently in the i hate this stage but I wanted to publish it.In 10 minutes if I still hate it,I'll take it down.
Anyways thanks for the support <3


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  • kealoha

    Aww I love this so much. Very creative <3 So relatable too!
    Replying: No problem! I love your work so much :)

    8 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    This is so creative!!
    Replying: Oh, you're so sweet. I have now alerted my brother that we have a triplet.

    8 months ago
  • Samina

    When I read this, I felt what you described. Good job! I loved the description.:-)

    8 months ago
  • MarvelousMarshmallow


    8 months ago
  • Two Heartbeats

    Replying: Heyyy. Thanks for the extended comment. You don't have to apologize at all. I love all the feedback and responses I get ad it makes my day. The stanza: When the boy has been harmed the mind looks for a home is a personal touch the follows some of my life experience and more importantly enhances the story of my parasite. Poetry is meant to be questions so I love that you did.

    8 months ago
  • birthdaycandles

    You’re way too harsh a critic on yourself! This is very good :)

    8 months ago
  • Sol noctis

    It's amazing!!! Why would you hate it...

    8 months ago
  • Two Heartbeats

    Replying: That made my morning. Thank You

    8 months ago
  • van gogh's girl

    Whoa. I like the twisted metaphors

    8 months ago
  • Two Heartbeats

    Really amazing job.
    Replying: you said you were gonna read my piece again and I believed you. Not out of my ego but you have a passionate generous soulful heart. I see it right here in your writing.

    8 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Wow! I love it! Beautiful, poetic work x3

    8 months ago