Common girl with uncommon dreams.
Perspiration always turns to perfection :-)
Yoga enthusiast
Hopeless Romantic

Message to Readers

This very sweet rant/ diss track is dedicated to my lovely expecting society, school, friends, and family. (don't wanna particularly mention someone). whenever I fail, I know where, I am weak, but, but, butt * people love to interfere.
My kind request to everyone please stop over expecting, when you know what is right and wrong.

P.S. I have been working on this daily for months. Whenever I feel angry this is my stress reliever. I don't know if it qualifies as a diss track.

*Not my original idea XD

word count - I don't remember
date published- 29-5-2020.. maybe 3 or 4 am


May 26, 2020


i  am  expectation

i break you
or make you
i extinguish the fire in your heart
or i give you a spark
i shatter your hope
or light a candle of aspiration
i can restrict your flight
or i can lend you wings to fly.
i can take away your sleep
or i can open your eyes.

i   am   expectation

i am synonymous with society.
when i am high,
i will give you dissatisfaction.

i   am   expectation

excess of me, not good for you.
i  sometimes give you light
to help you fight

i   am   expectation
i am good and bad
i am positive or negative

i   am   expectation
and i depend entirely on your attitude...

A strong desire or believe that someone or something will do it perfectly.Overambition of society that your capable to get stars.yes we are. But EXPECTING us to do something what they desire.

synonyms: society, parents, teacher.

a solution to this: Beleive in yourself and you know where what and who you are. Stay away from OVERAMBITIOUS people who always say good-good about you.


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  • Ahsan Nizaam

    You could have written it sooner! Saving a few heart breaks

    4 days ago
  • Ahsan Nizaam

    Eid Mubarak to yourself!!! How is the celebration going on in India;)

    4 days ago
  • Drishti Bhatia

    This is so true!

    4 days ago
  • hi i'm jackson ;)

    Whoah man!!! This is so good!!! How is this a rant it’s so organized, did you go through and edit?? It’s so well written, very awesome, very true, applause!! Keep writing you’re amazing!!

    4 days ago
  • Two Heartbeats

    Replying: Whispers of Gray says she is doing great. She asks how you're doing. And she says that she misses you excellent work.

    4 days ago
  • MarvelousMarshmallow

    @ xXlunagirlXx I think she’s not capitalizing as away to express herself and it works really adds to her beautifully put poem

    4 days ago
  • Two Heartbeats

    Replying: Thank for for the typo notice. ANd that's really cool. I also DJ all my school events but I write and produce with this sort of piano inspired house music.

    5 days ago
  • Two Heartbeats

    This is really really cool. I like this theme. Also I saw DJ in your bio. I'm also a DJ. What genre do you do?

    5 days ago
  • xXlunagirlXx

    Awesome job, this, I feel, should be in a poem book. But, why no capitalization?

    5 days ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    'i am synonymous with society' don't get me started about's so beautiful!

    5 days ago
  • Mishthi Sharma

    Replying- I remember XD

    5 days ago
  • Chloe :) <3

    Also Created a 50 follower contest and some of these prompts I think you might like! Please have a look if/when you can!!

    5 days ago
  • Chloe :) <3

    I agree with the message of this so much!! It is a really really beautiful piece and super powerful!

    5 days ago
  • Tapasya

    You're awesome as always!!!

    5 days ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Marvelous work! x3 It reminded me of a few characters I had created years ago.

    5 days ago
  • van gogh's girl

    Whoa. this is a cool new direction in your writing!

    5 days ago
  • Emi

    I love the personification here. It's very spot-on, and shows how much pressure the world can put on you to be a certain way.

    5 days ago
  • Happy butterfly

    I love this.But I also feel like apart from everyone's expectations of me,I have way higher expectations of myself which can really affect me alot.
    This is a great poem/thingamajig

    5 days ago
  • Doodleninja

    Ok, i rly love this cos i have this character of mine whose whole life has been molded by expectations and this reminded me of him XD very truthful message

    5 days ago