Jasmine khawar

India

~•I'm collecting my dreams, so I can decorate
them later on°~

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Dreams

October 6, 2020

PROMPT: Pocket Poem

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Who says dreams cannot be true?
I've seen flowers blooming at night,
I've seen moon at daylight....
from deep oceans i've seen the sunrise.
I've heard many gorgeous lies!
I've seen roses without thorns,
from the grey I've seen a rainbow borns.
I've seen a night...full of light,
Still who says dreams cannot be true?
 
Dreams are not only imaginary, those are people's thoughts that inspire them to do anything they like.
and my dreams inspire me to write this.
 

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33 Comments
  • CookieCake

    So true!!


    19 days ago
  • SunV

    Hey! I would love if you could leave a comment on my historical fiction competition entry, because I finished the piece really really late due to lack of inspiration... This is the link:

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/190123/version/389443

    Thanks a lot!

    I think I've commented this before, but this piece is truly amazing!


    about 1 month ago
  • spurtsofdarkness

    replying: um i’m sorry i don’t think i follow? what questions? i’m so sorry if i missed something?


    about 2 months ago
  • anonymous_123

    |I'm not a single gem, I'm a crown with
    thousands of them| love that! Also, you're right you just have to believe in the impossible, in yourself. Thank you for being inspiring! I need to keep telling myself this! Also, if you're reading this I encourage you check to check out my new novel, "He's Here" thank you and have a wonderful day :)


    2 months ago
  • beth r.

    k i already commented and liked but it's too gorgeous!!
    replying: thanks so much for all your comments!!


    2 months ago
  • RemovedUser1

    Oh, this is amazing! Love!
    Replying: The poem was about God:). And thanks for your comment!


    2 months ago
  • K-9crazy

    Woe! Best seller! Congratulations! I love this piece!


    2 months ago
  • Kit-Kat Sully

    Re: Thank you! Also, a great piece! :)


    2 months ago
  • happygiggles

    Amazing piece!!


    2 months ago
  • therisingwriter

    Stunned!!! What a creative work-- great--great!


    2 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    LOL


    2 months ago
  • beth r.

    Wow, this is gorgeous.
    replying: thanks so much for the comments on my work!


    2 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Aw thank you, I'm glad you like it! (lol I was so confused why you called my my name, and then was like ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I put it on my profileeeeeeeeeeeeeee)


    2 months ago
  • dovetrees

    this is amazing! i love the implication that impossibilities don't exist, it really gives an amazing mood :)


    2 months ago
  • Bhavya's Treasure (Bewitching Tombstone #Queenie's Halloween)

    This is brimming with possibilities of imaginations! And I liked the 'gem' line in your intro! :)


    3 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Replying- Thank you:)
    this is also very beautiful! :)


    3 months ago
  • Anlee

    oo this is a beautiful and encouraging poem <3


    3 months ago
  • Deleted User

    Replying: thank you:)


    4 months ago
  • ~wildflower~

    Replying: thanks for your suggestions! I’ll check them out :)


    4 months ago
  • Cheshire Cat

    #poemsonly is now open


    5 months ago
  • Ghoulgirl2020 (#Queenie's Halloween | I have been called Cool before if you know what I mean) ;)

    So I am approximately halfway through my Cedric + Hermione series. I am so happy that so many people have enjoyed this series. Thank you so much! Also, I have two new series that I have recently started writing. “Eight People To Go” and “The Academy of Minds.” Be sure to check them out! Thank you for being such a wonderful follower! ;)


    5 months ago
  • Fatima Zahra

    Encouraging to dream and inspiring to realize that dream.


    5 months ago
  • Charisse Marison

    This is absolutely gorgeous! It gives us all hope that our dreams can come true. Awesome <3


    5 months ago
  • ElsaRee

    This is sooo stunning!!! I LOVED it..


    5 months ago
  • Emi

    This is so hopeful and beautiful. I love the imagery you use "flowers blooming at night," "moon at daylight." It's a very fun fantastical feel.


    5 months ago
  • delete

    Fantastic! You’re absolutely right, dreams are true! The world is such a beautiful place and it’s such a positive reminder, especially during this turbulent time in our world. Keep writing you have a talent!


    5 months ago
  • Sanjana Sunilkumar

    its short & cute <3


    5 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    It is very encouraging and beautiful!<3


    5 months ago
  • Ahsan Nizaam

    Couldn’t agree more neighbour. Your piece is beautiful. Giving hope to the masses. Inspiring me to dream on


    5 months ago
  • black_and_red_ink

    Wonderful imagery and rhymes. I also love how you used repitition throughout the poem, such as beginning each line with "I've seen..." and asking the same question in the opening and closing lines. Very well done.


    5 months ago
  • Chloe :) <3

    The rhymes are beautiful and this piece is too!
    Also Created a 50 follower contest and some of these prompts I think you might like! Please have a look if/when you can!!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/168550/version/332138


    5 months ago
  • Mishthi Sharma

    Awesome!!!!!!!


    5 months ago
  • And_The_Stars_Laughed

    I love the subtle but effective rhymes you've seamlessly included, it works perfectly and your message is beautiful! Awesome job!


    5 months ago