Anne Blackwood

United States

16
Christian
Theatre kid
Singer (soprano)
Poet
Twin (fraternal)
Spoonie
Disfusive
Highly Sensitive Person
Living oxymoron
Kindness Krusader: Blueberry cotton candy
XXFJ, Melancholic-Sanguine, ambivert

Joined 1/16/20

Message to Readers

I haven't added to my poetry song collection in a while. Blerp.

Hopesong

May 20, 2020

FREE WRITING

13
I am yet to begin to know them well
But I prefer her laughter to the sweetest music
And his smile blooms a rewarding rose

I've gotten glimpses of a future possible
Lazy afternoon adventures and
Secrets exchanged in the night's embrace

We aren't exactly like each other
But there's a whisper of light entangling our lives
I crystallize moments to save as screenshots
Until they become memories and a backstory of love
My words
13: Rose
6: Music
11: Whisper

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11 Comments
  • Sol noctis

    Hey I'm just curious... Is that a raven in your profile pic???


    7 months ago
  • MarvelousMarshmallow

    Replying: Thanks again, love your poem btw


    7 months ago
  • MarvelousMarshmallow

    Replying: Ohhh ok thx :), do you have any tips on how to start on here? I'm a bit lost...


    7 months ago
  • MarvelousMarshmallow

    Is this how I would do it?


    7 months ago
  • Doodleninja

    you gave those prompt words the beautiful poem they deserved. Amazing as always :D


    7 months ago
  • delete

    Your imagery is so strong here to convey the atmosphere of romance and the hope for a relationship that can be long and filled with many memories. As the reader, I almost feel the love-struck feeling in my heart like the speaker in the poem feels because the language is just so effective in creating that mood! These would also be effective song lyrics as well, I can just imagine someone with a guitar singing this around a campfire. Good job!


    7 months ago
  • sunny.v

    this is so so sweet! seems like the description to a nice, sunset music video! beautiful!~


    7 months ago
  • mia_:)

    Ooh lah lah! You got great words and used them in fantabulous ways, dahling! I love the line "I crystallize moments to save as screenshots" because wow! Doesn't everyone want to have a snapshot of their happiest moments? I love this piece! Good luck in the tournament! <3 :)


    7 months ago
  • Emi

    This is so beautiful and sweet!


    7 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    'I crystallize moments to save as screenshots' what!! like what!!It is damn good<3


    7 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    I love this so much.//I crystallize moments to save as screenshots
    Until they become memories and a backstory of love// that is just perfection.
    //But I prefer her laughter to the sweetest music// that is also just perfection,so beautiful and a great way to explain feelings


    7 months ago