Samina

India

Common girl with uncommon dreams.
Perspiration always turns to perfection :-)
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Hopeless Romantic
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Message to Readers

something very random. I am laughing after writing this. XD

Chewing Gum

May 23, 2020

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Your love was like a chewing gum
Initially, it was EXTRA tasty,
you were like DOUBLEMINT
sweet, refreshing, and soothing.
you were like JUICY FRUIT.
you helped me concentrate.
you were 
But now it's stretching on,
you are ORBITing around me
Tasteless, Hopeless.

It is better to split it out now.
 
Word count 51
For those who don't know EXTRA, DOUBLEMINT, JUICY FRUIT, and ORBIT are chewing gum brand.
This is definitely not sponsored,

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10 Comments
  • Shireen Farooq

    This is called the law of diminishing returns. Actually the law is for the materialistic things. Ironically nowadays human relations become materialistic too. We are so deeply entrenched in the culture of use and throw even human relations are being victimized.


    3 days ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    XD Love this so much! The "DEFINITELY NOT SPONSORED" part in the footnotes got me lol. This is so unique!


    4 days ago
  • Emi

    Ha ha! I love the references to different chewing gum brands; this is certainly a unique take on love!


    4 days ago
  • amazing grace

    great. don't worry everyone writes pieces they don't really like, and we all get writers block. i wrote a piece on writers block that might help. and if you don't feel like taking a break from writing you might c think about taking one for about an hour, i find this helps.


    4 days ago
  • JadeAndSerpentine

    This is so clever; I love it!

    And thanks for your support! Of course I remember you :)


    4 days ago
  • Doodleninja

    that "ORBITing around me" got me XD


    5 days ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    Yeah I also think that it's not sponsored XD


    5 days ago
  • mia_:)

    I love how you bold the flavors! It has a really fun tone to it!


    5 days ago
  • lulu.mae

    This is so good! I love how you were inspired by something as simple as chewing gum, but you made such a beautiful piece out of it!


    5 days ago
  • poetri

    I like this! Very original and unique. And also kind of funny lol :)


    5 days ago