BizzleWrites

Australia

I'm Issy.
I'm 14 and an aspiring artist and author.
She/her
Black Lives matter.
Likes:
Bi puns
Murder mystery TV shows
Art
Shakespeare poetry
Dislikes:
I can't even be bothered writing them all down
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Goodbi
Have a nice day

Message to Readers

I know it is cringy but I really want feedback so please just give me any feedback

Covid-19 poem, (I am not a poet but drastic times call for drastic measures)

May 19, 2020

PROMPT: Solidarity

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Out the window are no people
On the streets or in the shops
Out the window are no lovers
Out of hope when all is lost
But all is not lost
All is not gone
We can 
We will 
Carry on
Send cards
Play games
We must stay together 
Even if we are apart
Our hearts connect us
Our homes protect us
Even in our darkest days 
There will be light
There will be love
Out of my window sits a dove
Living still and loving still
A magpie warbles in a tree
There is good for all to see
So stay together
Don't break apart 
For we will are still together
In our hearts  
So some of it was a bit cringy, but this is my first long poem and overall I like it.
Please, I really need peer reveiws.

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2 Comments
  • BizzleWrites

    Ruthh, Thank you!!


    12 months ago
  • Ruthh

    I can’t believe this is your first long poem! It flows really well and bought a smile to my face :)


    12 months ago