i just like writing :0
I'd love tips on word choice !!!!!! I know mine is not super strong lol.
Written By: rainydayz
May 19, 2020
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replying: no problem! i’ll get to this as soon as I can!
Thank you for all the sweet comments it really made my day :)
I agree with the previous comments; this is lovely! welcome to wtw :)
This has such a nice flow to it and it's amazing. And the word choice is fine! I think that the simplicity of the words you use actually really add to it! Awesome job <3
“ could my youthful conscience cause such illusion? / my network of confusion on overdrive” i love these lines! nice piece, i actually think your word choice is good for the most part!
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