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This was captivating. It touched on the topic of human nature, and the curiosity of what comes next. There is so much left unsaid and that is what is interesting. You also impressed me by mentioning 'the kind of place that is meant to be forgotten', no-one thinks about those places, but they are there.
Depressed. Sad. Tired.
There weren't really any places where you missed things, I think this play is very sad, but that is part of the point.
Keep writing, you are amazing at it.
This play makes you think about the grey people, the ones who sit in the shadows, not being seen or being forgotten immediately. Once again, let me say how good this work is.