Two Heartbeats

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Kind of a mixed bag of every emotions who paints words like he's putting on armor.

Message to Readers

This is my boyfriend piece. This is me. Please edit and review.

If you date me... (Spoken Piece)

May 25, 2020


If you date me
take note that my eyes will shine different,
You saying yes is the same thing as lighting a match in them.
It will light quick and when left alone,
Burn things in me you weren't aware were your responsibility,

I call that heartache.

If you date me,
Allow me to be the big spoon,
Because I have put so much practice into my pillows,
That they are damp with my failure,

Know that I probably can't pick out the perfect necklace without you there,
Because I can't see your eyes quizzing me on how well I know you.

If you date me,
I hope my hoodies will learn the curvature of your body,
Better than it learned to soak in my freshly showered hair,

Know that I consider meals like ramen and pasta,
Products of my good cooking, 
Because to be honest,
I think it can bring more laughs than a fancy restaurant.

If you date me, 
Expect nothing less than 2 facetimes a day,
Because I need to guarantees that the last face I see, 
Is that of the person I'm fallen in love with.

It will always be a need to hear your laugh,
And hear you tell me again how much you hate it.

If you date me,
You're going to get a raw piece of my heart,
A piece that is soaked in tears and shampoo
That comes alive at night,
When the veil of "I'm Okays" finally falls.

If you date me,
Know that if you treat me like shit,
I'm still going to feel like you deserve more.
Because I'm bad at love.
Really fucking bad.

If you date me,
I'm going to fall in love with you,
Because at the end of the day I chose you.

That little piece of my heart feels safe in your rib cage.
Here's another love poem from a hopeless romantic.
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  • Samina

    I have subscribed to your channel from two of my channels. I also sometimes post poems . wow we are very similar.

    6 months ago
  • Samina

    Saw the video link. Wow it was amazing
    Btw: Even I do the same thing on my Youtube channel. I have subscribed as well :))

    6 months ago
  • Samina


    6 months ago
  • Samina

    This is so beautiful. I understand (another hopeless romantic). I hope you find you love soon...

    6 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan


    6 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    Though it's a beautiful piece, I'd suggest you to use 'f**K" instead of the complete word because I think they might take the piece down for language. Also for your competition, do you have any specific format for spoken pieces because I haven't written any before, wuld love your suggestion.

    6 months ago
  • sunny.v

    this is sweet and so intimate at the same time. nice work! i watched your video, you read it so nicely!

    6 months ago