Peer Review by BizzleWrites (Australia)

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a single teardrop

By: HelpMe512


FREE WRITING

a single teardrop
disguised as rain
rolls endlessly
from my eye

this single teardrop
is my failure
because i could not
control my fear

your single teardrop
turns into many
you have no shame
you aren't like me

a single teardrop
wiped away
before anyone
could even tell

lowercase intentional

Peer Review

I really liked this, I think it flows very well. Great work.


I think that this could be a song or a poem, so it would be good to know which. But I'm pretty sure you meant it to be a poem.


Reviewer Comments

Overall; great work! Keep writing and don't ever give up on it.