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Feedback is greatly appreciated! :)
I loved the originality of the piece! It's both quite abstract and very close to home - it resounds on a deep level, even as I don't quite know what that level is! You do this really well in all of your writing :)
You could add a bit more detail, maybe some more imagery to it (though what you have got is incredible!). It's not necessary though; this works as it is so well :)
This is great! Like, seriously great writing. Well done!
Sorry if this isn't a great review; I don't have much time but I loved the piece and thought it deserved a review! Keep writing - your work is amazing :)