Peer Review by julia.vasyakin (United States)

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when the stars align

By: Souled Out


FREE WRITING

when the stars align
the sun will shine
washing away our fears

the grass will grow
the wind will blow
blessing all our tears

the rumors will stop
the stories will swap
and the skies will start to clear


Peer Review

THIS IS AMAZINGGGGG!!!!! It is short and sweet, very poetic and beautiful. The rhythm and words you chose for this go very smoothly with the piece. You chose very simple words and told an entire story in these words. Keep going, this is amazing.


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Reviewer Comments

good work! i love this!