Peer Review by Sol noctis (India)

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when the stars align

By: Souled Out


FREE WRITING

when the stars align
the sun will shine
washing away our fears

the grass will grow
the wind will blow
blessing all our tears

the rumors will stop
the stories will swap
and the skies will start to clear


Peer Review

"when the stars align" this first phrase itself tells the reader so much...and then it's like we know stars would never align so the whole poem is just like hoping against hope.


It's kinda very deep already. The more you read it the better it gets everytime.


Reviewer Comments

You are just amazing!
Keep going buddy!!
:)