doodleninja

United States

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~your local angst-y Christian girl~

when I'm not brooding you can find me trying to write comedy in my series "stereo tropes co." :)

soli Deo gloria!

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>call me "doodle" :)

>check out my series "stereo tropes co." where story tropes run amuck in an office setting!

~"you write so beautifully. your mind must be a terrible place."~
always on the lookout for tragic backstories and broken characters. :D

take my hand

May 14, 2020

FREE WRITING

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Take my hand
No, leave me be
I want to help
You can't help me
I know you, I love you
Death will set me free
Wake up, get up!
You're blind, but I see

Why do you lie there?
Why do you stay?
You're going to die
Is it my lucky day?
Think for a moment!
I've thought life away
Let me hold you
It's okay, it's okay

I can't leave you here
How kind, how sweet
Let go of your fears
My fears have feet
Please stand up
My worries stand for me
Please take my hand
No, leave me be

...

Where am I
I'm here, I'm here for you
No, I died
No, I rescued
There's nothing left for me here
I know you are blue
I told you to leave
That's something I'll never do

...you're not lying?
I promise 
you're true?
Honest

I can't trust, not yet
I completely understand
But can you do something?
What is it?
Can you hold my hand?





 
based off a story I'm brainstorming. Full of angst, as all my writings are :D

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5 Comments

  • Two Heartbeats

    This works. I really really love this perspective and conflict and you draw out this beautiful argumentative context. Nice job!


    10 months ago

  • Ruthh

    Wow, I love the two different voices! Really interesting


    10 months ago

  • joella

    tysm for the love on my recent piece! can't wait to read the short story this is based off of :)


    10 months ago

  • Emi

    Oh, this is so beautiful! I feel as if there is so much symbolism and messages I could read into in this poem, and they're all gorgeous!


    10 months ago

  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    OMG!!! THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!! T-T


    10 months ago