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It really captures the love and security you feel from God, and I think it is very poetic. It also kind of reminds me of what Aslan from the Chronicles of Narnia would say.
I like this so much! I would love it if it was longer and explored more concepts in your faith and what you feel from God. Also, the first stanza is so good, I might repeat it at the end.