ineffable

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ambedo
opla
nodus tollens
gnossienne
mimeomia
fata organa
lalalia

(The Dictionary of Obscure Sorrows)

Joined 5/5/2020

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Experimenting in a new style

what space stole from us

May 14, 2020

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something has shifted. we are two
tectonic plates, and one more millimeter
has been added to the rift between
us. usually i wouldn't notice, but this
time i was scared. we are still so, so
close, but there are words that we
can no longer say, moments tossed up
to be whispered in the stars.
Experimenting in a new style

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3 Comments
  • sunny.v

    short but sweet! i really, really liked how you managed to pack such strong emotions into a smaller piece. nice work!! ^-^


    6 months ago
  • fatpanda

    experiment definitely successful lol. really appreciate the beauty of this piece


    6 months ago
  • mia_:)

    wow! i'd declare this experiment a "smashing success!" (I've always wanted to say that :D)

    "Moments tossed up to be whispered in the stars" is such a breathtaking line! I can feel it ringing in my ears and know it'll stay with me long after I finish reading this! Great job!


    6 months ago