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Message to Readers
writing this was cathartic :) all feedback really appreciated! #champions
the q&a answers are coming out soon so stay tuned!
This... is absolutely haunting and beautiful. Your writing never ceases to amazing me... This is a masterpiece.
I love how you've used the metaphor of water in this piece, it's lovely and not too overused, well done! I do have one question, why do you scare your past self? How can you deepen that feeling in the writing?
I love the imagery in this piece, oh goodness, incredible.
I don't have much constructive criticism I'm afraid, but I hope the few suggestions I had helped.