Samina

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Night on Terrace

July 26, 2020

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On the terrace
we hold each other’s hand.
You’re deep blue eyes glittering in the moonlight,
the stars gleaming in the inky sky,
the fireflies in motion form our names.
The day of 10 April,
We cuddle and read a book together
my silky hair brush on your check
moonlight kisses your honey skin
and then your pearly soft lips gently rub against mine.

Word count 64
Date completed 11 May 2020
10 April is the 100th day of the year. I had a specific reason for this. Firstly, this is my 100th piece. And isn't April romantic?
 

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13 Comments
  • Writing4Life

    So great! Yeyyyyy congrats on getting featured!


    3 months ago
  • Bhavya's Treasure (Bewitching Tombstone #Queenie's Halloween)

    This is sooo beautiful!!! And the reason you chose April 10 is so creative... Loved it thoroughly. <3
    I've a doubt. Shouldn't it be "Your deep blue..." Or did I interpret something incorrectly?


    3 months ago
  • EliathRose

    Holy guacamole, this is beautiful. Great imagery!
    Replying: Ahaha, I see what you did there.


    3 months ago
  • Eblinn

    Lovely!


    5 months ago
  • Eleanor M

    replying: you can definitely submit that piece for my contest, but if there's any way you can incorporate a lyric, that would be great! if not, that's okay too!


    5 months ago
  • PureHeart

    This is couple goals for sure! You've literally described everything I want in a relationship. So romantic and dreamy and beautiful.


    5 months ago
  • Emi

    This is so sweet and romantic. I love the imagery and description you show here; it is so beautiful.


    5 months ago
  • Jasmine khawar

    Beautiful...however I love all your work:) <3


    5 months ago
  • mia_:)

    Replying: Oooh, thanks for reminding me! Also, I love this piece! :D


    5 months ago
  • rosemarywisdom

    Love this poem! Vivid imagery and I especially like the line "the fireflies in motion form our names." April is romantic.


    5 months ago
  • birthdaycandles

    Such a dreamy piece, and I love how you’ve thought out the symbolism of 10th of April, very cool!


    5 months ago
  • Chloe :) <3

    Wow! This is a beautiful piece !! Thank you for the entry this is perfect!!


    5 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    Congrats for completing a century! And please get well soon.....<3<3


    5 months ago