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i'd love a review!
This piece was unique. I loved the capitalization you had, making it your own and showing the symbols with it. It definitely added to the piece and made the reader think deeper into everything you capitalized. Your description and depiction of the artwork was amazing and something I never would've thought out. After analyzing the picture I felt lost and confused, but your description really brought me together. Also, your ending was amazing. I just had to mention it. Its imagery was lovely and the concept made me smile.
If you were to add detail anywhere, perhaps just a few more imagery descriptions on like the "hands" and "arms" reaching out. Like the tan or color of skin, perhaps markings or birthmarks too that could add to the character. You could expand on why, "God loved the ocean". If you wanted, there's definitely room there for you to expand and sprinkle in your magical figurative language writing talent.
Read this piece and saw in your "message" box, and thought I'd try giving you a review. Hope it was helpful, although, everything is purely a suggestion. Best wishes!