Peer Review by CrazyNinjaKid (Australia)

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A Burden

By: Charisse Marison


FREE WRITING

I'm so sick
Of being myself
I hate the person
I have become
I want to change
I know I'm a burden
But I don't know how
I don't want to be a burden
Why am I this way?
Why am I so stupid
So boycrazy
so obsessive?
I hate
Everything about me
Why did God make
A burden like me?


Message to Readers

I'm not doing this for attention. I just needed to get some feelings out.
Because I suck.
I'm so sorry to everyone who has had to put up with me. I'm trying.


Peer Review

So emotional and can see how much of your heart has went into this! Remember you matter!! <3


Keep going with this. Sometimes anger can get our creative side, lifting it right from beneath us. Extend on these emotions and feelings and see where it takes you.


Reviewer Comments

Awesome work mate! Keep going