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pisces
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swiftie
a shy people's person
wtw's official little sister:)

i've spilt all my stars out for you

Message from Writer

special wtw sister to anne blackwood<3
honey aunt to FantasyOtter12:)
spectral and i are admirers who love keyboard

it's time to sing something for no other reason than to feel my voice -anne blackwood

so rearrange the world and perhaps you'll find your celebration of humanity -dmoral

I'm not going to walk past you while you cry

May 14, 2020

FREE WRITING

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I don't want to walk past you while you cry,
So please tell me if you're not fine.
Cause I hear that word alot,
My stomachs tied in knots.
I care ,
Dont be afraid to lie in front of me bare,
No lies to cover the truth of your feelings.

I'm here,
right by you,
But I can't help,
If a cloak is draped across your shoulders,
A cloak of lies and "I'm fine's"
You're made out of glass,
I can see right through you,
Even if you try to smudge the surface so I can't see.
Don't be afraid to show me your pain,
For my love for you is too great
To watch you cry under a solemn face.

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7 Comments
  • Coolgirl2020 (LOVE YA ALL)

    [speechless] Wait, no, I do have something to say...THIS IS AMAZING!!! I SO FEEL YOU!!!
    Anyway, sorry about Percy Jackson. I really, really love Percy Jackson and all that, but I just think Magnus Chase is TOO funny. And I definitely think Percy Jackson and Kane Chronicles are on the same level; I just didn't put that up there. I'll be sure to do it next update, though. ;)


    10 months ago
  • Two Heartbeats

    This is such a strong relatable piece. I love it so much.


    10 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    This is amazing. I have friends who are like this. They make me explain when I say fine, I try to do the same


    10 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Lovely


    10 months ago
  • Ezinne Clare

    This piece is lovely.
    Replying: Check out this contest https://www.writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/162436/version/319098
    I was asking for your permission to use that piece (I hate change) for the last prompt. It's totally fine if you won't like that but comment on my piece if you're okay with it.


    10 months ago
  • Cosmogyral

    thank you for the message <3


    10 months ago
  • bambiamby

    this is so beautifully written!!


    10 months ago