Hailie Ogden

United States

14
loves to read
Forever Lost
Writing=life

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I think that no one sucks at writing, the first draft is always going to be messy and criticized, but the best writers pull through it and revise their writing until they believe its perfect.

I need to move on

May 10, 2020

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Sitting in the car
Waiting for my daddy
Smiling out the window
And waving at every car I see
Always being hopeful
Excited
Happy
Until he never showed up
Then I feel
Sadness 
Pain
Loneliness
And 
Lost
Why didn't he come?
Was it me?
Did I do something?
What did I do wrong?
I feel so lost
Every time he didn't show up
I lost a piece of myself
A part of my heart was broken
There was no point
But I couldn't help but
Wait for him
And become hopeful 
Excited and happy
Each time
I felt so disappointed
I was always waiting
But now
I'm going to try to leave him behind
This time
I can't wait forever for a dad that will never come
That won't try to change for me
That doesn't make me feel loved
It's time to move on
This is in the POV of my brother when he was five and older. I hope you like this!

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