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The imagery was beautiful. I loved how it was simplistic but also meaningful, where you were able to remember it even after you finished reading it. The flow and formatting were beautiful. Both interlaced to form this aesthetically pleasing and delightful read. Everything seemed to roll off the tongue effortlessly and look remarkable while doing so. Also, I enjoyed how you personified the ocean a little bit and talked about it as if it were a dear friend. Brilliant work!
The only thing that really stood out to me, was multiple lines started with the same words, so it got kind of repetitive. For example, I felt like "Let" and "We" were used a lot. Besides that, there was nothing really else outside of what I highlighted.
Great work! Keep writing!