Circumlocution is my revolution!
Hey, this is my second draft - so hopefully this should be rid of all the silly errors, and hopefully my characters seem stronger in this. I'm scared I'm not able to bring out the tragedy of Tia and Myra's parents' marriage well enough - although it seems a little simple, I want to depict that somewhere this affects the lives of everyone in the family, especially Tia. Your review will be really helpful!
Written By: Vanilla
May 10, 2020