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Message to Readers
Please don't take this too seriously. Though they may not show it 24/7, your parents love you! Blow your mom a kiss and thank her for all she's done. Give your dad a hug and thank him for everything he's done to support you.
The really rigid structure honestly. it's enough to make a poet swoon.
Maybe, you could add in a couple parts appreciating your parents. Just a few lines saying how they push you to be better maybe. For the duality
Dude, I love you're writing, you do so much of it and it's all awesome.