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Message to Readers
Please don't take this too seriously. Though they may not show it 24/7, your parents love you! Blow your mom a kiss and thank her for all she's done. Give your dad a hug and thank him for everything he's done to support you.
I was moved by how relatable this poem is. My parents, while not as demanding, still make me feel miserable sometimes.
I would like to know just how strict the writer's parents are, not just for the poem, but because I'm slightly concerned.
This is a very relatable poem that has nice rhymes. Good job! :)