Peer Review by Zoe (Australia)

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The List of Randomness.

By: Cody


1) Truth: Unicorns were real

2) Untruth: Tornadoes

3) Truth: A pizza with a crust of doughnuts

4) Untruth: Sardines

5) Truth: Anti-break pencil lead

6) Untruth: Bad school food

7) Truth: Land whales, like in The Croods

8) Untruth: Ugly land Whales

9) Truth: Doctor Who

10) Untruth: Paper cuts

 



Message to Readers

Anything you would add or I may find helpful.


Peer Review

I agree most with the anti break pencil lead! I get so sick of that!


They're not really tied together at all, but that's a good thing. It kept your mind going every time you changed the subject!


Reviewer Comments

It really made sense and I loved all of your wishes!