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I find A pizza with the crust of doughnuts very interesting. A person with a mind that could come up with that is very creative. I appreciate a human that is not the cookie-cutter stereotype, boring, and plain jane. You are creative and interesting.
The author creates continuity throughout this piece by keeping everything random, tying this together with a central theme of no theme.
Cody is definitely my favorite.