Peer Review by Jazmine Alexus (United States)

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The List of Randomness.

By: Cody

1) Truth: Unicorns were real

2) Untruth: Tornadoes

3) Truth: A pizza with a crust of doughnuts

4) Untruth: Sardins

5) Truth: Anti-break pencil lead

6) Untruth: Bad school food

7) Truth: Land whales, like in Croods

8) Untruth: Ugly land Whales

9) Truth: Doctor Who

10) Untruth: Paper cuts


Message to Readers

Anything you would add or I may find helpful.

Peer Review

I find A pizza with the crust of doughnuts very interesting. A person with a mind that could come up with that is very creative. I appreciate a human that is not the cookie-cutter stereotype, boring, and plain jane. You are creative and interesting.

The author creates continuity throughout this piece by keeping everything random, tying this together with a central theme of no theme.

Reviewer Comments

Cody is definitely my favorite.