ᴅᴏɴ'ᴛ ᴡᴏʀʀʏ 'ʙᴏᴜᴛ ᴛᴏᴍᴏʀʀᴏᴡ ᴀɴʏᴍᴏʀᴇ.
the people closest to death are the loneliest.
Written By: chrysanthemums&ink
May 7, 2020
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HOW AM I JUST SEEING THIS BEAUTY
that quote in your 'message' box-------gosh, i freakin' love it.
"our insignificant lives against the universe / a dystopian needle in our dimples / against the cruel wind, we tremble like leaves."
this is amazing. the overwhelming thought of being too small for the world and universe we live in? uh, yes! a genre in which you classify and mention as a part of life? totally! the metaphor, beautifully done!
"our apathetic eyes scan over it, pathetic / what does darkness have on us?"
favorite lines and your diction is godly.
"and living is better than misery?"
the rhetorical question we all secretly want an answer too addressed? perfectly!
"the end is near, darling / let's wait for each other"
irony: putting 'end' in the actual ending and ending the piece breathtakingly? you've done it all in this piece and i'm officially obsessed.
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