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Message to Readers
dedicated to the friend I parted ways with before high school
I still think about you sometimes <3
Wow I can really relate to this feeling... It's a feeling hard to be at piece with and stays with you for far too long... This poem caputured it really well. Love your use of descriptive language and little details.
Perhaps what do you miss about the memories of the friend? What other imagery could deepen the feeling of bittersweet memories?
A wonderful piece! I loved reading it, well done. :)