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Made some changes! PLEASE let me know what you think! Any feedback would literally mean the world to me! Also, still looking for the perfect title!! REVIEWS PLEASE!!!!! <33
I was really moved by the whole message! Each of the paragraphs spoke volumes to me, and they were very relatable. I also really loved the words you used that I would have never associated with this topic, such as constellations and stars, and I think the way you work those into the piece is absolutely incredible. All in all, great work!
Most of this piece, you talked about body image, which is cool, but you also might want to delve more into personality. What you said about loving you for you is absolutely gorgeous, and I think adding more about loving your personality, not just your body image, would be a wonderful addition
I'm sorry if I seemed a little harsh! I really love this piece and I am a huge fan of your work. Thank you for writing such an inspirational piece!
All the love,