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I loved this piece so much. I can agree on all of this some people think they are ugly fat not right or how they should be.
It is so wonderful how you use different examples of how people think of themselves and how others think of them. Um, the only thing that I think it needs is a little more detail and just expand on it.
Also for a good title would be your beautiful just the way you are or all of you is beautiful.